ok DR no offense but you dont sound free
after that rap i had to pee
id hate to live your life
id hate it even more if you had a wife
so remember no offense
but i guess now im gonna have to do some self defense.....
Hence the simple word 'pointless'
Like dstates said they are all pointless
There are no meaning to the words
Just as useful as my turds
I wish today that there was something
But not just these raps you see here
A lot of songs today are nothing
It seems as though they are written over beers
ok DR no offense but you dont sound free
after that rap i had to pee
id hate to live your life
id hate it even more if you had a wife
so remember no offense
but i guess now im gonna have to do some self defense.....
One thing I'd like to point out, for your benefit and future raps you write, is line no. 2 in that rap.
It has no purpose
It doesn't fit into the rest of what you're saying, it just rhymes.
It's little things like this that make all the difference.
lmao, i felt nothing but amusement after reading the supposed "pwnage"
seriously, do you even read your stuff Chingy?
I'm justing pointing out it lacks structure and originality.
I've heard the same words come out of a hundred different people. It sounds empty.
besides, i don't hate, its bad for you.
nice one dstates
well i do try. But maybe if i put more effort in....
And besides, it was all about trying to get the message across. Wasn't meant to be moving, or extremely world-class standard rapping. And the pwnage bit was for entertainment purposes only. Maybe im not as dumb as i may seem. So don't underestimate me.