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PseudoAnxiety
posted on Jun 25, 2010 12:29:28 PM - Report post
It touched me deeply.
How joyful to be together, alone
as when we first were joined
in our little house by the stream
long ago, except that now we know
each other, as we did not then
and now instead of two stories fumbling
to meet, we belong to one story
that the two, joining, made. And now
we touch each other with the tenderness
of mortals, who know themselves;
how joyful to feel the heart quake
at the sight of you
old friend in the morning light,
beautiful in your night robe!
What do you guys think?
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RANGER_1
posted on Jun 25, 2010 2:39:58 PM - Report post
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springer13
posted on Jun 25, 2010 9:12:19 PM - Report post
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Well I read it a couple of different ways and cant find the flow, but its still nice
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RageaholicRick
posted on Jun 26, 2010 11:56:48 AM - Report post
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Whiskeysoaked
posted on Jun 26, 2010 12:01:40 PM - Report post
Who does it belong to? that's pretty cool.
I listen not to sympathy
Whilst ruler of this land
Withdraw your feeble aches and moans
Or suffer smite from this my hand.
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cheater11
posted on Jun 26, 2010 11:22:47 PM - Report post
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PseudoAnxiety
posted on Jun 27, 2010 5:15:18 PM - Report post
I'm not sure who wrote it, but it is a beautiful poem about two lovers who always find a way back to each other.
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