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here are some poems i made. just wanna share with you guys

tea time
drinking tea all the time
while listening to the bell chime

tea is my favorite drink
but i flush it down the sink

that yellow-green water
innocent and has no hater
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ice cream
cold and sweet they are
frozen and above a bar

so nice and sweet to lick
but it may make you sick

chocolate,vanilla i like them all!
especially after a game of football

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dynamite
red and hard they are
if lit up leaves a scar

it's filled with gunpowder
and it's red all over

if the fuse is lit
that is how we use it

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car
a very wonderful thing
that i love to hear sing

racing is my favorite game
and not all cars are the same

your song makes me calm
and helps me control my palm

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coffee
darkness that we all drink
and it always makes me think

we all fear darkness
but we're fascinated by it's amusingness

people are interesting creatures
that drink the coffee darkness

please comment guys. thanx

i oooove ice cream. and its winning too

Ice Cream I guess...

i asked my whole class and ice cream wins too lol

They're all horribly written.

dont have to be so harsh dude. it's a couplet and that is how its written. i am not a pro and i just wanna share

The ice cream one is rather funny

I am just being honest with you.